Group Narrative

Narrative writing Characters:

Sydney- the teenager seeing demonic figures 

Mrs Willow- the psychiatrist who gives meds to Sydney but is also joins forces with Mrs Chapel

Mrs Chapel: works at the asylum is a demon

Grace (mother): is the innocent yet her body is taken over

 

1. Sydney is in her home in her bedroom, she gets kidnapped and gets dragged out 

(fear of being alone in a home) 

Pan, tilts, extreme close ups  

2. Visit psychiatrist - Mrs Willow  

• Pan of mis-en-scene then onto the characters

• Two shot mid shot

• Over the shoulder

3. Gives her meds to take

• Close up of pills dropping into hands 

• Close up of hands to mouth taking the pills 

4. Refuses to take them

• Stops suddenly, close up of eyes darting left to right

• Voices, whispers “ they’re trying to kill you, it’s poison

• Mid Shot of girl, high pitch scream, camera shakes with dynamic

5. Thinks they’re poisoned 

6. Mum tries to make her take it 

• Two shot of the confrontation, shouting while she is screaming 

• Mother begging her ( Mid shot)

7. She calls up the psychiatrist , advises her to send her to the asylum (physiatrist-demon)

• Mid Shot, cuts between conversation, “ I think the ____ Asylum would be best for her”

8. Gets sent to the asylum

9. Sydney looks under her bed then gets dragged out of her bed 

• Birds eye shot of her lying on the bed 

• Tracking shot of her getting off the bed to the floor

• Low angle point of view pan from left to right 

• Cuts  to Establishing shot of Sydney, suddenly being dragged

10. Sydney in the class room 

• Mid shot  of her sitting down 

• Close up of fidgeting hands , shaking leg , showing other parts of her body showing she is agitated/troubled 

• Off the shoulder shot as Mrs Chapel walks towards her 

• Camera slightly tilts towards Mrs Chapel, slightly zooming in

• Mrs Chapel looks normal suddenly cuts to her face as a demon  

11. Ms chapel tries to drown Sydney in the bath (shows brutality) 

-Use of go pro, slightly fish-eyed lense

12. Realises Mrs Chapel is a demon 

13. Sydney gets locked into her new room

• Birds eye view of struggle running around the room trying to get out of the room acting franticly 

• Close up’s of her facial expressions, extreme close ups contorted face

• Suddenly brakes free, close up of feet touching the ground

 

14. She escapes asylum 

15. Mrs Chapel and Mrs Willow are in the woods connecting with supernatural 

• 360 degree shot, as they are being possessed by the supernatural forces  

• Close up’s of disorientated faces and actions  

16. Sydney walks through woods or alley way and see’s creepy people and thinks she’s going mad, then they disappear  (jump scare when she turns around)

• Behind shot, frontal shot, as she walks

• Close ups to face, as she looks around

• Mainly mid shot as she continues to walk  

• Point of view as she see’s people

• Jumps scare when she turns around

• Go pro as she run’s panning area 

• Long shot of her running 

17. Sydney running away 

18. Train station, she sees dark figure (sees figure staring directly at her, train leaving station, train passes person disappears 

19. Running through tunnel (Greenwich foot tunnel) 

20. Sydney returns home and mum opens the door and lets her in, she turns around and realises her foster mum is a demon 

• Mid shot of her banging frantically on the door

• Pans to her almost falling in as it easily opens 

• Suddenly scrambles to get up scared, tracking shot Upwards

• Point of view looking around  

• Mid shot of her  backing away from the door and stopping 

• Demon foster mum grabs her around mouth

21. Ends : ‘The ones you love, the ones closest to you are the ones you should be afraid of!'